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Post by jacob21 on Dec 9, 2008 7:12:07 GMT -5
December 11th
He walked down the street towards the bank with plans to rob it. He needed the money for a birthday present for Meridith. He also did it for the thrill and excitment.
As he got closer he noticed something but there was nothing there. The heat he emited from his body caused heat waves in the distance. This helps him notice things that others miss.
He walked towards the thing that he noticed and then he bumped into something. It was the thing he noticed but there was nothing there. His heat waves made him see someone but they wern't there.
"Who are you", he said to the thing.
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Post by cullen on Dec 9, 2008 7:36:20 GMT -5
He had been walking through the park, Invisible as usual. Jack hadn't been out in a while, and he hadn't be visible in even longer. He thought about if people even remembered he existed, as he walked past, knocking people out of the way of his path, they turned and looked around, confused.
Then, he saw a man, a bald man of stocky complection, who seemed to be looking straight at him. He wondered if the man was just staring at something behind him, but to Jack, it didn't look like he was. He continued to walk, and the man seemed to follow him.
Can he see me? Jack wondered, until the man bumped into him, questioning, asking, who he was. Jack turned visible.
"What?" he said, confused. "How could you see me" Jack said, turning invisible again and starting to run. "Stay away from me"
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Post by jacob21 on Dec 9, 2008 7:56:40 GMT -5
The person he couldn't see finally appeared in front of him. He had dark, curly hair and he was a scrawny person. He asked him what he wanted and then to stay away from him. Flint walked away but he still had much on his mind. Who does that guy think he is talking to me like that he thought to himself.
Flint continued on to the bank. His anger over that invisable man was racing through his mind. He walked into the bank and then he saw him again. The invisable man was there. Flint walked towards him still having all that anger through his mind.
"Hello invisable man" Flint said to him.
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Post by cullen on Dec 9, 2008 8:02:35 GMT -5
Jack had been running for a while, a finally decided to hide from the man in the bank. He just sat in one of the corners, invisible, stunned, that that man could see him. He honestly didn't know what to do. Not ever has anyone been able to see him when he was invisible, what could he do.
Suddenly, he heard the voice, the voice again of the man that could see him. He looked up, the man was standing over him, looking down.
"What do you want from me!" He said to the man, angrily. "Who are you!?"
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Post by jacob21 on Dec 9, 2008 8:38:50 GMT -5
The invisible man asked who he was.
"I am Flint Gordon, and you are my hostage" He said in an evil tone of voice. He raised his hands and a burst of blue flames came out.
"Everyone on the floor, NOW" he shouted. Everyone dived on the floor and Flint walked up to a woman at the desk.
"Give me all your money" he shouted to her. But then Flint noticed that the invisable man was gone.
"Where did you go invisable man?" he shouted.
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Post by cullen on Dec 9, 2008 8:55:24 GMT -5
The man answered him, his name was Flint Gordon. Jack was surprised as Flint's hands turned into blue flame, and Flint screamed like he was going to rob the place. In fact, that was what he really was doing.
Jack got up, and moved from where he was, as Flint tried to get all the money from the register. He quickly moved towards Flint as he got the money out of the register.
Flint asked where he went, and jack snuck up behind him.
"My name is Jack Cullen, and I won't let you do this" Jack said, jumping onto Flints back and punching at him, his ability going on and off in the tension of the moment, as Jack tried to be a hero and stop this guy from murdering anyone.
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Post by jacob21 on Dec 9, 2008 9:05:49 GMT -5
The man was gone and Flint didn't know where he was or what he was going to do. All of the sudden he appeared behind him and told Flint that his name was Jack Cullen. Then Jack jumped on Flint's backand started punching him.
Flint became adjitated and fustrated. Then Flint threw Jack of his back and into the wall. Then Flint lost control.
"This is what you get for being a hero, now your going to die" Flint shouted.
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Post by cullen on Dec 9, 2008 9:23:03 GMT -5
When Jack was thrown against the wall, he barely heard what Flint had said. He saw what was happening, Flint was getting annoyed, and was starting to turn blue. He noticed that Flint was almost on the verge of exploding.
Jack didn't have much of a choice, he stood up and just ran, towards Flint. He didn't know where he got the courage, but, he did, and he threw himself at Flint.
As he flew through the air, Jack felt what it was like to be a hero, for the first time in his life. He crashed into Flint, tackling him out the window. Glass shattered around them as they flew past everyone, barely able to see the gasping faces of people as he and Flint rolled down the hill, towards the deep ocean.
Jack felt the heat on Flint growing, and his face started to burn, going darker with every second they rolled, Jack still trying to fight in the midst of it.
"You won't kill again, Flint" He said to him, as they rolled, almost hitting the water.
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Post by jacob21 on Dec 9, 2008 9:32:33 GMT -5
When Jack tackled Flint out the window, Flint felt the sharp stinging of the glass penertrate his skins. This made him even more angry. He started turning blue and they rolled down the hill.
They kept rolling and Flint was about to explode in extreme anger. They both plunged into the water and then he exploded.
A big ball of water and fire burst from the top of the water. Flint crawled out of the water and looked back. Nothing.
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Post by cullen on Dec 9, 2008 9:39:23 GMT -5
They started to fall into the water, and dropped, splashing in the water. The light from Flint's blueness lit up the water around him, and he opened his eyes, watching Flint. The light bounced around in the water, lighting up everything in the area as Jack sunk, along with Flint.
He saw what was happening, his life flashing before his eyes. He saw Maya, the girl he saw in the street, crying that time, when he was meant to be investigating her. He saw Tess Landers, when he was in Vegas, the girl he had met with the ability of conjuring electricity.
Then, it happened... Flint exploded, and Jack blacked out... He finally knew what it was to be a Hero, to save lives in the risk of endangering his own...
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